The implication underlying this picture is rather thought-provoking. Nowadays，many students in universities or colleges are not sure of what they want andwhere they will go in the future. They easily become anxious and helpless whenchoices confront them.
What should we do? In my opinion， the most important thing is having a goal. Itis crucial for us college students to understand what we actually want and whatkind of men we want to be. And then follow your heart. If you have the ambitionto be an expert in some fields， you will naturally choose to study abroad ortake the entrance test for postgraduates. And if you are willing to improve yourworking skills or just feed yourselves early and support your families， you willbe the hunters chasing after jobs or the creators of a new company.
參考譯文
生動所示，成千上萬的畢業生正麵臨著他們人生中的選擇。目前對於他們而言一般有四種選擇，分別是就業、考研、出國和創業。似乎他們相當困惑，不知道哪個是最好的選擇。
這幅漫畫的隱藏含義相當發人深思。現在，很多大學生不確定他們想要什麼、未來將去向何方。當他們麵臨選擇的時候，他們很容易變得焦慮無助。
我們應該做什麼？在我看來，最重要的就是有一個目標。我們大學生很有必要知道我們實際上想要什麼以及我們想成為什麼樣的人。接著要做的就是聽從你的內心。如果你有雄心成為某些領域的專家，你自然會選擇出國留學或參加研究生入學考試。如果你願意提升工作能力或隻是盡早養活自己或養家，你將尋求就業或成為一個新公司的創始人。
範文詳解
本文得分為17分，是2013年北京地區考研閱卷組滿分檔（17-20）範文，由於北京地區閱卷頗為嚴格，目前較難取得18分以上的成績。本文共三段、12句、203詞。首段為圖畫描述，共三句，是“總—分—總”結構。首句是總體描述，運用了定語從句放在句首（也可理解為方式狀語從句）、被動語態、主係表結構。第二句為細節描述，出現了Therebe句型、非限製性定語從句、平行排比。第三句進行小結，使用了物稱代詞it 放在句首作主語、主係表結構、並列結構、賓語從句。首段先後運用了thousandsof， in face of， generally， search for a job， get admitted， postgraduate， studyabroad， enterprises， it seems that， confused等精彩表達。
第二段為意義闡釋段，共三句。首句是過渡句，承上啟下，使用了現在分詞短語放在名詞後麵作定語、主係表結構。第二句點出圖畫的象征寓意，出現了介詞短語放在名詞後麵作定語、主係表結構、賓語從句、並列結構、一般將來時。第三句進行解釋論證，運用了主係表結構、時間狀語從句。本段依次出現了implication，underlying，rather，thought-provoking，arenot sure of，become anxious，helpless，confront等精彩詞彙和詞組。
第三段為歸納結論段，共六句，是“總—分”結構。前兩句為總論，使用了設問的修辭手段。第三、四兩句進行解釋論證，第三句出現了物稱代詞it放在句首作形式主語、主係表結構、不定式短語作真正主語、賓語從句、並列結構。第五、六兩句進行分類論證，第五句運用了條件狀語從句、不定式短語放在名詞後麵作定語、一般將來時、並列結構。第六句出現了條件狀語從句、主係表結構、並列結構、一般將來時。本段先後使用了crucial， ambition， expert， naturally， takethe entrance test for postgraduates， be willing to， improve your workingskills， feed yourselves， support your families， hunters， chase after jobs等精彩語言。
值得注意的是，本文拋棄了大多數考生使用的萬能模板，幾乎全部為現場發揮，沒有套話痕跡，錯誤很少，而且緊扣主題。文章並未使用太多的難詞長句，大部分以中學詞彙和句型為主，完全體現了考研寫作的原則：簡潔、地道、舒服。考生應該摒棄“越難越好”的寫作誤區，紮紮實實提高英語寫作實力，而非盲目堆砌難詞長句。
10分作文樣例
It goes without saying that this drawing aims at illustrating the choices infront of we university students who have been graduated for from school. I thispicture， four roads-searching a job， further study， going to a foreign countryfor study and doing a own business， sperate in the face of the students.
Now it is increasingly important for us to make a good decision in the stressfuland strainful competition which may frustrate us. On the one hand， differentchoices may lead us to a completely different way which may influence us in thefuture. On the other hand， the opinions of our parents and relatives which aredifferent from ours may confused us. What's more， none of the choices means aneasy way.
As the saying goes， "To left， or to right， that's a hard decision". From whathave been discussed above， therefore， it is necessary that some effective andefficient measures should be taken. First， a campaign about choices must belaunched. Second， we students should think over before we make a decision. Asfar as I am concerned， only the choices which suit us is the best one， so weshould make the final decision following our heart.
評語
較好地完成了試題規定的任務：
包含所有內容要點，允許漏掉一、兩個次重點；
使用較豐富的語法結構和詞彙；
語言基本準確，隻有在試圖使用較複雜結構或較高級詞彙時才有個別錯誤；
采用了適當的銜接手法，層次基本清晰，組織較嚴密；
格式與語域較恰當。
能對目標讀者產生預期的效果。
3分作文樣例
Choice
In this picture， many students who will be leaving university， standing stay onthe road， in front of them， there have four roads stand by their ways， but atthe same time， they are lossing cloudn't do their choices.
It looks impossible， because there are so many ways， but in fact， it isunfreshing in the university. I think， they are not ready to go. In China， 16-17years time we study in school， but we just study a little knowledge that how toslove the problem in our life by ourself or partwork， in fact， we study Chinese，English， Physiting... in more time， then when you should choice by yourself， youare not ready to do.
評語
未完成試題規定的任務：
明顯遺漏主要內容，且有許多不相關的內容；
語法項目和詞彙的使用單調、重複；
語言錯誤多，有礙讀者對內容的理解，語言運用能力差；
未使用任何銜接手法，內容不連貫，缺少組織、分段；
無格式與語域概念。
未能把信息傳達給讀者。
十八、2014年英語（一）高分作文
Part A
Directions：
Write a letter of about 100 words to the president of your university，suggesting how to improve students' physical condition.
You should include the details you think necessary.
You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead.