十七、2013年寫作真題範文（得分由高到低）
英語（一）
Part A
10分作文樣例
Dear Prof. Smith，
On behalf of the "Talents" English Speech Contest committee， I'm writing toinvite you to be our new judge. As the core part of our "Foreign CultureFestival"， this school-wide contest is due to be held in the Students'Auditorium on May 12 （next Sunday）， and we believe that you can give ourcompetitors some enlightening comments as both a native-English speaker andknowledgeable professor. To be more specific， the event will start at around7：00 p.m.， and last for 2 hours at most. At the end of it， we will have somehand-made presents for each judge and competitor.
Once again， we sincerely hope you can be the judge for our competition. RSVPbefore this weekend.
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming
Chairman of the "Talents" Speech Contest
參考譯文
尊敬的史密斯教授：
謹代表“天才”英語演講比賽委員會，我寫這封郵件是為了邀請您做我們的新評委。作為我們“外國文化節”的核心部分，這場全校性的比賽將於5月12日（下周日）在學生大禮堂舉行，我們相信您作為一位英語母語人士和知識淵博的教授，能給我們的選手一些啟發性的點評。具體來講，這場比賽將在晚上七點左右開始，最多持續兩個小時。比賽結束時，我們將給每位評委和選手發放一些手工禮物。
我們真誠地希望您能成為我們比賽的評委。本周末之前盼即賜複。
您真誠的，李明
“天才”演講比賽主席
範文詳解
該文得分10分，是2013年北京地區考研閱卷組滿分檔範文。該文很好地完成了試題規定的任務要求，格式和語域恰當，包含了所有的內容要點——如提出邀請，介紹比賽的性質、時間、地點等等，使用了豐富的詞彙和正確的語法，采用了有效的銜接手段，行文自然流暢，層次分明，能對目標讀者產生預期的交際效果。
本文共兩段、六句、130詞。首段共四句，首句進行自我介紹，表明寫作目的，使用了介詞短語放在句首作狀語、現在進行時。第二句說明比賽的性質、時間、地點和邀請原因，出現了介詞短語放在句首作狀語、被動語態、並列句、賓語從句、介詞短語放在句尾作狀語。第三句陳述比賽的具體時間和安排，運用了一般將來時和並列謂語。第四句介紹比賽的禮品。本段先後使用了onbehalf of， talents， committee， core part， school-wide， dueto， auditorium， competitors， enlightening comments， native-Englishspeaker， knowledgeable， to be more specific， event， at most， hand-made presents等精彩語言。
第二段共兩句，首句再次表示邀請，強化了交際目的，使用了省略that的賓語從句。尾句期待回信，使用了RSVP這一縮寫。
值得注意的是，本文拋棄了大多數考生使用的萬能模板，幾乎全部為現場發揮，沒有套話痕跡，錯誤很少，而且緊扣主題。文章並未使用太多的難詞長句，大部分以中學詞彙和句型為主，完全體現了考研寫作的原則：簡潔、地道、舒服。考生應該摒棄“越難越好”的寫作誤區，紮紮實實提高英語寫作實力，而非盲目堆砌難詞長句。
8分作文樣例
Dear foreign teacher：
I am writing to you to invite you to attend our upcoming English speech contest.We hope you can be our important foreign judge in order to give the usefuladvice and object justifications to the competitors. The competition will beheld at the school of foreign languages in our university. It will begin at 5：00p.m. on Sunday. We hope you can arrive there ten minutes earlier because we needto consult with you about some crucial rules.
Best wishes to you， we can't wait to see you and hear your wonderful comments.Thanks for your assistance again.
Li Ming
評語
該文較好地完成了試題規定的任務要求；
格式和語域基本恰當；
包含基本內容，但是缺少演講主題；
使用了豐富的詞彙，但有少量的語法錯誤；
行文比較流暢，層次比較清晰。
能對目標讀者產生預期的交際效果。
6分作文樣例
Dear Mr. Lee，
There will be an English speech contest tomorrow morning held by speechAssociation. It's our pleasure to invite you to be our judge for the upcomingEnglish speech contest. The purpose of the contest is to let students speakEnglish well and the students really need some help in speaking English.
The speech contest will be held at 9：00 a.m. tomorrow at Room 1802. If youaccept our invitation， please let me know. Your coming will be a great news forall the students. I believe.
I'm looking forward your reply.
Li Ming
評語
文章基本完成了試題規定的任務要求：
格式和語域基本恰當；
雖有遺漏，但也包含主要內容；
語法結構和詞彙能基本滿足表達要求，有一些語言錯誤；
使用了簡單的銜接手段，行文基本連貫，層次較清晰。
能基本產生預期的交際效果。
3分作文樣例
Dear teacher，
It is my pleasure that I have to need your help， and I hope to you will give meyour help. Because you are the teacher that I am favorite and I went to listento your course immediately.
I want to invited you to be a judge for the upcoming English speech contest.It's hard to give me this choice to invite you. So I want to see you in theupcoming English speech contest， and It's necessary to you to give us the choiceof learning knowledge.
I hope to see you in that time. Thank you at first.
Sincerely yours，
Li Ming
評語
未能完成試題要求完成的任務：
格式尚可，語域和語氣不恰當；
遺漏了邀請函的主要內容；
詞彙量有限，語法結構比較簡單，語言錯誤較多；
未能清楚地把信息傳達給目標讀者。
2分作文樣例
Dear Miss Jim，
Hi， Miss Jim! How are you?
Today is sunny. The sun is very beautiful， just like you. It's a long time tomiss you. And now your students are nice like us? Is your working well?
However， let's talk something. There is a English speech contest. We need somepowerful to be our judge. Are you interested in? in this time， I'm in heartinviting you to be a judge for the upcoming English contest.
We are waiting for you.
Yours Li Ming
2013.1.5
評語
未能完成試題規定的任務：
無格式、語域、語氣概念；
語法結構簡單、單調，詞彙貧乏，語言錯誤多；
內容不連貫，行文不暢，有礙理解。
未能把信息傳達給目標讀者。
0分作文樣例
Dear teacher
Part B
17分作文樣例
As is vividly depicted in the picture， thousands of graduates are in face ofchoices in their life. There are generally four choices for them now， which aresearching for a job， getting admitted to be a postgraduate， studying abroad andcreating their own enterprises. It seems that they are quite confused and don'tknow which might be the best way.