十六、2012年寫作真題高分作文及講解
英語（一）
Part A
高分作文
9分作文樣例
Dear Friends，
I am glad to know that you will come to our university. I hope you can have agood time here. I write the email in the name of the Students' Union. Now I willprovide some suggestions for your campus life here. First， you should live inthe apartment which is built for you. Second， you will live with some otherforeign students. Third， you can eat in the restaurant in our school. If youwant to buy something， you can go to the supermarket in our school. Fourth， youwill have classes from Monday to Friday. The details will be written in theclassmates-must-knows.
Again， I wish you have a good time here.
Yours，
Li Ming
參考譯文
親愛的朋友們：
很高興得知你們將來我校。希望你們在這兒生活愉快。我代表學生會給你們寫這封電子郵件。現在我想給你們在這兒的校園生活提一些建議。首先，你們將住在專門為你們建造的公寓裏。其次，你們將和其他一些外國學生一起住。第三，你們可在我校的餐廳吃飯。如果想買東西，你們可以去學校的超市。第四，你們周一到周五上課。詳細信息將會寫在《學生須知》裏。
再次祝你們在這兒生活愉快。
李明
高分作文詳解
該文很好地完成了試題要求的任務，既表達了歡迎之意又為國外留學生的大學生活提了四條建議。語言自然；層次分明，表達流暢，銜接自然；措辭和語氣恰當，完全達到了寫作目的，用詞準確，語法錯誤極少；格式正確。本文得分9分。
Part B
高分作文
As is vividly pictured in the drawing， a bottle is on the floor ground withwater flowing out from it. Facing with the same situation， a man is saying "Everything is ruined." While another man is saying "It's lucky to have somewater left." What is conveyed in the drawing is both realistic and meaningful.