3.第三段在第二段論述的基礎上得出結論, 不僅升華了主題,而且突出了中心,圓滿完成了寫作任務。
4. 短語亮點
not…but… 不是……而是……
come from 來自於
take…for example 以……為例
because of 由於
teach oneself 自學
give up 放棄
lead to 導致
set a good example to sb. 為某人樹立好榜樣
make contributions to 為……做貢獻
keep on doing sth. 一直做某事
5. 句子亮點
1) 主語從句和賓語從句: What Thomas Edison said suggests that it is not inspiration but hard work that leads to success.
2) 主語從句: It is clear that hard work leads to success.
3) 賓語從句和狀語從句: Some people think that many famous people have succeeded just because they were born with special talents.
4) 狀語從句: Though he studied in school for only three months because of poverty, he taught himself and learned a lot;If you are to make great contributions to society, you have to keep on trying until you succeed.
5) 定語從句: He made more than 2,000 inventions in his life, some of which have greatly improved our life;
6) 並列句: Thomas Edison had tried more than 1,600 materials and failed, but he didn’t give up easily.
7) 強調句式: It was his persistence and hard work that led to his final success.
【技巧點撥】
近年來,越來越多省份在高考中采用開放性作文。開放性英語作文的特點是,試題中沒有提供具體的寫作要點,僅僅提供了一幅漫畫、一句名言或是一個話題,要求考生在正確理解寫作素材的基礎上,自主確定寫作的內容和主題。隨著試題開放性的不斷增強,高考書麵表達對考生的寫作能力提出了更高的要求。一些考生覺得開放性作文比較難寫,原因在於沒有現成的寫作要點和提綱可以參考,考生需要自主確定寫作的內容和主題。