五、2001年寫作真題高分作文及講解
高分作文
20分作文樣例
Among all the worthy feelings of mankind， love is probably the noblest. It is ofthe utmost importance to the human beings. Everybody not only needs love， butalso should give love.
As is described in the picture， "love is like a lamp which is brighter in darkerplaces." This is indeed true. People in darker places need more light thanordinary people. Maybe even a dim light can give them much hope for a betterlife and progress. Maybe just a thread of light will call forth their strengthand courage to step out of their difficulties.
For instance when someone is starving to death， just a little food and waterfrom you may save his life. Or when a little girl in a poor rural area drops outof school because of poverty， just a small sum of money from you may support herto finish her schooling and change her life. You have given love which is like alamp in a dark place where light is most needed.
So to sum up， we should offer our help to all who are in need. We expect to getlove from others and we also give love to others so when you see someone indifficulty or in distress and in need of help， don't hesitate to give your loveto him / her. I believe then the relationship between people will be harmoniousand our society will be a better place for us to live in.
參考譯文
在人類所有的重要情感之中，愛可能是最崇高的。愛對人類至關重要。每個人不但需要愛，而且需要將愛給予他人。
所示：“愛心是一盞燈，在越黑暗的地方越明亮。”事實確實如此。黑暗中的人們比其他人更需要愛。甚至可能一點暗淡的燈光也能給予他們改善生活的極大希望。也許一道光就會喚起他們的力量和勇氣，並幫助他們走出困境。
例如，當有人將要餓死時，你的一點食物和水就能挽救他的生命。又如，當一個鄉下的小女孩由於貧困被迫退學時，你的一點錢就能支持她完成學業並且改變她的人生。你給出的愛心正如黑暗中最需要的一盞明燈。
簡而言之，我們應該把幫助給予所有需要的人。我們希望從他人那裏得到愛，同時也把愛給予他人。因此當你看到某人身處困境、需要幫助時，應毫不猶豫地把你的愛給他/她。我相信人們之間的關係將會更加和諧，我們的社會也將變得更加美好。
高分作文詳解
內容切題，包括題目中所列的全部內容；文章通順，語言流暢，句式變化多樣；用詞麵較寬；雖有個別不妥之處，但作者基本功較好，表達能力較強；長度符合要求。
全文共四段、十四句。首段三句，是“總—分”結構；第二句使用了形式主語、主係表結構和精彩詞組；尾句使用了並列結構。首段出現了 it is of theutmost importance和 not only ... but also等精彩表達。
第二段意義闡釋共五句，是“總—分”結構。首句點出圖畫的文字說明，使用了方式狀語從句、被動語態、主係表結構和定語從句。第二句承上啟下進行過渡。第三句點出圖畫的象征寓意——人處困境尤需幫助，使用了介詞短語作後置定語和比較結構。第二段先後運用了dim light，a thread of light，call forth，step out of difficulties等精彩詞組。