read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries 4. _______
much about the radio program young people listen to， 5. _______
although radios can be very noise. Teachers also wonder 6. _______
about the effects of television commercials. On one year the 7. _______
average child will see 25，000 television commercials， all 8. _______
planned and written by grown-ups to make children to want 9. _______
things that they don’t real need. 10. _______
（四）
When I first learned to write in English， I ran into 1. _______
many difficulties. The main problem was in that I 2. _______
always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything 3. _______
into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. 4. _______
I followed her advice and should put down 100 words 5. _______
or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on 6. _______
paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. 7. _______
One day I wrote a little story and showed to my 8. _______
teacher. She liked it very much and reads it to the class. 9. _______
They all said the story was a good one. Their word were 10. _______
a great encouragement to me.
短文改錯答案詳解
（一）
1. famous 前加 a。mountain 為可數名詞。又是第一次被談及，故應在 famous 前加不定冠詞。
2. 此行無錯。
3. noon 後加 when。It was about noon 是主句，後麵的應為從句，故在 noon 後加when，此處 when 意為“在……時候”。
4. them 改為 us。綜觀全文可知，此文是用第一人稱的口吻來敘述的。
5. visiting 改為 visited。此處climbed，visited 和 told 構成並列謂語。
6. picture 改為 pictures。
7. passes 改為 passed。應與全文時態一致。
8. 刪去 down。
9. and 改為 but。飯菜很貴不是一件令人愉快的事，而服務質量很高確實是一件好事，故前後為轉折關係。
10. 刪去 at。the moment直接引導時間狀語從句。
（二）
1. 此行無錯。
2. got 改為get。通讀全篇，可知道本文基本時態應為一般現在時。